The Cannon Fodder Female Lead’s Script Collapsed After Being Read by a Mind Reader

Yet another good premise ruined by a trash author. The trash author just cant help himself from writing cliche, cringe trash and ruining the otherwise fine novel.Like, the cliche parts arent even necessary, but this incompetent Chinese idiot feels the need to add it.

The beginning I was like”what the heck” but I still did not give up,  and I have to say I’m happy I didn’t. The story is made really nice, characters are not boring and you can see the changes in them. One of the best stories without any systems or magic or stuff like this that. Really happy to pick it up.

I only have read 4 chapters so I don'r think I have any qualifications to write a review but still whoever is interested in it can read mine. So in the first 4 chapters we have a game picking that he can't choose himself, a mc that can steal other people of their hard work basically crippling them. So far so good can both be accepted even though I don't like that he didn't choose it himself the second one is preference I don't mind it if he is a little 'evil?'. But the Problem for me is that in chapter 4 a new Funktion of monopoly was activated which is just something seemingly unavoidable which is easily avoidable and which ist just making problems and forcing him to be known by everyone and being in the limelight... Id that isn't enough When you look at the chapter title that thing gods on for another 30+ chapters or so to resolve it.

The story is (as the author frequently mentions) quite  the cliche. However, I don't really mind that. An author doesn't have to reinvent the wheel to write an amazing story. Fuethermore, the "second-chance VRMMORPG" genre is one of my absolute favourites. With that said, I would like to start my review.The initial summary and the positive reviews made me incredibly excited. A gunslinger in a fantasy world? How fun and imaginative! Even though it's not 100% original, I don't mind it at all! The author might seem slightly too protective of his story and (honestly?) a bit scared of constructive critism, but, once again, I don't mind. However, even after 20 chapters, the novel still doesn't seem like a VR story. Quite frankly it's like the author cant bring himself/herself to decide whether to write a LitRPG or a "transported to a different world" novel. Even characters (NPCs) that are utterly pointless (and are literally AIs) are introduced with a whole lifestory attached to them. Why? What does this information contribute to the story? It is a game. Not a real world. However, honestly I wouldn't have minded this so-called 'game' if it wasnt for the excessive swearing. The protagonist is a 34 year old pro VR gamer yet even after reincarnating he acts and talks as if he is a child. How he (supposedly) controlled a guild with 5,000,000 players in it is utterly beyond me. I know it can be difficult to write in informal language. But just adding cursewords into sentences doesn't solve it.Oh yeah, and he is called "manco" (japanese for vagina). The former void assassin, super player, reincarnated guildmaster literally adopts the name pu**y in his quest for vengence...So yeah. In conclusion: I dropped it.

ohhh god here we go again another i see hint theme novel pls stop, if 1 new novel theme got chosen it immediately copy itself become more it's going to get boring, just like pet novel

I wasn't calm. Not anymore. This woman was beyond sane. I tried to think what Tattletale would do in a situation like this. Because as far as I know, she is an extremely smart Thinker.

Future Knowledge :  I will be rereading my story from a readers prospective to see mistakes. Thank you for reading my Storyyyyyy ⬇️ keep on reading

Damiano: Huff, huff... Mamma mia!