The Brothers' Umbra

The cover of your book really captured my attention. This book is very very interesting. Kudos to the author ?

I spent my money on this book and really enjoyed  it if I don't get to read ending it's a wasted.. would to see book completed

The story is fast paced and has the potential to shine as the author further dwells into the happenings.Though there are a few grammatical errors, it doesn't take away from the overall sentence structures and is a good read.There area few horror scenes that are not my cup of tea but then am a faint-hearted person.Expect more quality work from the author.

It's not easy finding a good novel these days. It has good grammar and the flow of the story is also good, like hella good. Everything is reasonable that you can't really complain and make you want to read more. The issue of whether its harem or not... this is just my opinion, since I'm already quite attached to the well-made characters, I'm kinda hoping that it is a harem, I don't want this to be like a japanese anime where the freaking MC don't choose a girl. ANYWAY, 28 out of 10. lolP.S. Thanks for your hard work, and please work harder for more chapter (no pressure).

The story is fairly interesting but is ruined for me by a few things. The first big thing is the fact that the system brainwashes the people he pairs with into liking him. Its strange and kreepy when it is shown. The next is that the mc is a bit of a kreep as well to me. The Translation is also poor and there are also gramatic errors littered in. Lastly the way the novel describes and deals with cultivation is wierd and confusing.

good novel and now the time to fill the minimum words what should i spam or should i just keep talking like this to myselfwill it work,,,,and i can post it now great but honestly the quality of the novel has been great till now, the stability of updates... can't say much and as for the romance, the mc is gonna have 2 girls or more but 2 girls is pretty much confirmed. There are gonna be greek gods in this and they are pretty much gonna be destroyed bcz he, the author hates them. Sadly you can't edit the reviews on webnovel otherwise I would have added some more stuff to this review, right now, i am not cuz i am not in the mood to. Well, bye and do give the novel a try

My cut had just turned into a full blown stash.

Raven glanced up at him then back down at the remaining glasses in the sink. "No, not really… same shit different day." She glanced back up at him, "Do you ever feel like all hell is breaking loose and all you're gonna be able to do is get dragged down with it?"