I'm 18 chapters in and I already know it's a bad knockoff of the inbred child of Martial God Asura, Library of Heavens Path and Tales of Demons and Gods. There is one more novel that I'm getting really strong flashbacks about while reading this novel, just can't seem to put my finger on it. Like, "Goddammit I've read this annoying crap before."The character is overly arrogant. Villains are so one dimensional. MC defeats a typical villain, the villain gets help from a stronger villain, who after being gets help from an when stronger villain, rinse repeat. This is all I'm getting from only 18 chapters, so just think about the amount of bad writing this is. And yes do not forget about the fact that art current rate, it's gonna take 15 yrs to translate this novel.Do not read.
Very good stories, updates are great, Mc is a rock, and this is one of a kind.YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES
kinda good novel to read. but what I hate the most about this genre is too much bystanders talk about mc etc that wasted the chapter. what ever they talk about inside the game has no meaning and effect to the plot of the story. so I hope author write less nonsense like that in the story. bystanders talk only a spice in a story so dont put it more than 10% coz it will only make it looks like unneeded main ingredient to the whole story and in the end the story become delicious to read anymore.
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This is actually a pretty good story. It started up very slow. Very hard-working MC as a grasshopper climbing the food chain and emotional story telling that can make a man cried little bit .
I've read a couple of chapters and this story is interesting so far. The prologue was pretty intense and I like how the author described the president. I feel like the author incorporated their personal views on politics and how the politicians can be very questionable. For the characters, I originally thought that Hitomi was gonna be a cliched "I'm not like other girls" girl but she's not. Instead, she admires her best friend, Minako, even though she is the complete opposite of her. She mentions that people view Minako as promiscuous but Hitomi doesn't seem to think any less of her friend, which is a good thing since it shows that Hitomi is not super judgmental towards what other people do with their own bodies. I also like how the author described the Smiths. It feels like the author is taking from their own experience of what Mormon families in the US are like. I liked how the author described Hitomi's experience in the US and how the change impacted her. I thought it was very appropriate for the author to include Bible quotes at the beginning of each chapter since this is a story that involves angels. Now for the negatives. Mainly just poor grammar. I thought it was a little weird when the author started describing the MC's posterior and chest. However, it then related to Western beauty standards and Hitomi's self image. In that case, it was kinda relevant. But then the author mentioned that people who are muscular and very sweaty are "Totally worth it
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