Serafall got off of him and turned around with a dead stare. One that looked as if she wasn't even alive in the first place. Even Valerie's stare with a broken soul looked like it had more life than Serafall's.
"They're there at my house, the Authotorians. They found my place, good thing I placed a few traps before leaving. But that won't slow them down." He explained.
The story is incredibly engaging, making it easy to read the entire book in one sitting. However, that’s also where its main drawback lies—the author’s upload schedule is inconsistent. While the chapters are of decent length (I’d estimate around 1,500 words each, though that’s just a rough guess), the overall progress feels a bit slow.That said, this book is definitely worth reading, and I believe most people would enjoy it. Though the story is still relatively short so far, the quality makes up for it.
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
i will say that this is a nice twist to the normal vrmmo or dude just being a necromancer, the world building is nice and well thought of, and the characters are really great, even tho I hated some of them in the beginning such as van but they quickly grew on me
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