Finally having a weapon, he walked towards the door and took off the chair. At that moment, a sound of broken glass resounded in the room, turning around. He saw that the entity had gone through the window.
And knowing that her knowledge of his affair and her probably thinking that even until this time he is still with her tortured her soul that she probably sees her death as release... cuts him up every single second and will continue until he finally dies.
Read until chapter 15 and then kinda bounced around to see if the story picked up. So in those chapters the MC has zero growth that we read about wheather in the systems power or his own personal growth. We see him use zero skills or magic really. MC goes around making enemies of the guards and servants like that helps his odds at surviving. No world building beside we know there is 4 kingdoms and the church. We know c loathe humans but does nothing else but think he is smart and making plans we know nothing about while doing nothing. Like a teenage girl in a bad movie writing in a jornal about future plans. I’m also confused how he knows he is a necromancer when we see nothing in the system stating that. He also never once purposely used the skill corrupt to see what it does just for the help of it. It’s like we are suppose to know all these things in advance is their a part 1
Overall a good story. More depth needed but so far interesting ..The introduction of internal energy could be a good path to explore but I really can't wait to see how the story progress going forward. Let's hope it doesn't flop going forward while it had such a great start.
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