The Beginning After The End [ON-GOING]

Do well to drop your reviews, so I can make amendments where necessary.

At the time of the review there are 6 chapters. and I like tho story a lot and think it has a lot of potential. I am really interested in the brother sister dynamics and hope it will continue to be developed.

Sorry but dropping it early. The novel has a lot of fillers and it feels like the author is underestimating soccer players too much or the mc is just trash. First, the task given is 2km running, drink 2 litters, Spend 2 hours in the gym. The mc [author] created a loophole and not realizing it, just run 2km in the gym and gets double reward but nope. Also, a soccer player can run around 6 to 8.5 miles per game or 9.7km to 13km. I understand that the mc is a goalkeeper but 2km is ridiculously low for the mc to whine about how hard it is. Btw, I understand that the latter chapters may be better but not all reader willing to go through almost 20+ chapters of mediocre writing to get there. Anyway good luck.

more eeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee continue IM Sasuke ..... eeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee

Im suprised this novel doesn’t have more views it really good story at least so far.  Can’t be sure if it will stay that way only time will tell and keep up the good work author.

one of the best money trying comedy novel i have ever read.. it will make you laugh, i recommend reading it, i promise you won't regret it..

Don't waste your time on this. Other than translation everything else is   trash, mc is narrow minded and two faced. It feels like the one wrote this story is living in cave, very boring and one dimensional.

This **** really took off. The MC is not very smart, moderately lucky and is generally bery human like. The other characters are quite good too and come in all shapes and forma.