The Ashes of Betrayal

Just love this book

If your thinking on reading this then its a few things you should know ive read the whole first volume of the book which is 160 chapters and ive enjoyed the stroy the characters are really fleshed out and the plot looks pretty good along with the world building but there are a few things i really didnt like 1 of those things is the Author keeps forgetting elements in his whole story when we first learned about the element it was only the basic ones but then he adds a new on every time like nature or summoning which wasnt a thing at first then i dont like the power system i dont think its very well made if you dont have a staff you can only use 10% of a spells power which i think is stupid cause as long as you disarm someone you win basically harry potter rules the grimoires are said to be really strong but they dont do anything but provide new spells and protect the host very little and finally the worst thing the end of volume 1 was just terrible in my opinion basically the author forces the mc and he's closest ally to fight which i think its very forced .

Droped at chapter 12. The reason is that characters are too simple and well more like dolls than humans. There are some very odd small mistakes like how can actors own clouthings get dirty when he is acting for a movie. Time is also sciwed dont get it if there was only 1 day gone or months as at one point all his cenes are done but at another point he goes home and hey mum I got that move part o.O. Abou spelling well past, present and future is a mess but spelling it self is ok.So I dont get it how so many give 5 stars. I do think that some may like it but 5 stars is clearly overkill.

Honestly this novel is good and funny but this paywall is getting more ridiculous than the MC himself. I mean ok you have 2-4 chapter locked it's fine but this novel have FIFTY FUCKIN CHAPTER locked atm and this number keep growing. Last week i think it was 30 or 40 something but right now, for every "FREE" chapter you get 3-4 locked. The fact that more and more novel use this system mean that no matter if you are level 1 or 5 you will have Spirit Stone for 1 novel and the others well 1 month for 4 chapter doesn't sound really good.

An interesting fan fic of ATG and Bleach. When I was reading the first 20 or so chapters there was many times I felt the urge to cringe but after those chapters I feel like the story has found its tone and rhythm which now has made it one of my favorite fan fics on Webnovel ☺ So if you can get past the initial hurdle in the first few chapters you will find a well written and enjoyable story 😝 Keep up the good work! 👍

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There are very few novels that can make me say this but this novel is absolutely one of them. It is a MASTERPIECE. That's it, that is all I have to say. Actually this is the novel that compelled me to write up a the story for my novel. 10/10 - 100% of the time. No doubt about it.

The author have the ingredient on writing the story, the author's writing style is descriptive! With the author's writing style, I can hear the sound and I  can imagine the surroundings. On the synopsis, the author wrote if you are into  "realistic fantasy powered by science