The ash of sea

I wanted to give this book a try after seeing it do so well in ratings, and if you have chosen to do the same, and end up sticking with it, all the more power to you.I for one just count get past the first few paragraphs of this novel with the fact that he is 18 shoehorned in, as well as other small fact, hammered in again and again, the same words used to describe just used to death.Maybe the writing skills of the author improve, after all, it is just the first chapter. But the fact that they have felt 0 need to make any changes with how poorly it reads doesn't give me any hope for the future, or any want to continue.I wish the the author the best of luck, they seemed to have cultivated a good following with their book, and I'm sure that their ideas have fleshed out nicely after being able to give the time to it, but as it stands now, in what I assume to be it's unedited state, I cannot continue with it.

A very fine story for readers to read if they are very much into the system thingy . A very fine new system introduced by the author thereby it is no harem but its best in writing sense.  Lots of love to the author and hope they will update the novel on a daily time to time basis. WE HAVE HIGH HOPES FOR YOU AUTHOR! good luckk.

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This story is quite good and interesting.                         You should keep this story going author.                        I love it     

Just another shameless Author rating their book 5 stars. it's my first public work. I know it isn't the best, but I hope that it will get better as my experience and confidence grows!

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60 chapters in, and I'd say it's pretty niceThe grammar could certainly use some improvement, but I'm sure it's gonna get better with timeJust hope that the updates remain stable

the story is really good and i recommend it