Smooth building of the storyline, engaging descriptive words with the world building as well. There’s more to see with the MC’s character development, as made with an interesting introduction. I’m going to read further into this as I liked the story development.
This novel has so much potential to be good and there are points where it’s fun to read. My complaints are:- The ranking/cultivation system is not mentioned leaving you to question what rank comes before or after.- the mc use of resources just seems so ridiculous and unnecessary- the author tends to drag the chapter out with useless information that is repeated over and over again just worded differently.- the world building and character description is barely satisfactory (I don’t even know how certain characters look only their names)This novel leaves so much to be desired and it sucks because it really has potential to be a great novel.
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