Really great job!! The author created a really good story and character, a big world where we learn with the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid every cliché without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. Still early but I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.
I don't know what's going on here. Maybe I missed something cuz things got supernatural and everyone just takes it like "meh". It gave me a feeling that it was a supernatural world and superpowers are no secret. Unpolished writing and tons of plot holes around. Things seems to be too rushed and characters have no emotions either.
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This is fantastic, the development, and action scenes are very well developed, the character growth, and strength growth is really well done, and I can see myself reading this for a long time.
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