it's good. Not more to say other than god I wish I had that system haha, think about it never being scared of dying but instead seeking it hahah. And then again would he become even stronger when he dies of age? might even unlock some time power or something. I hope this get chosen and that more chapters are released faster.
- Too many words in one chapter, because its cliche story when you read first few sentences you can expect what will it become- Slow Development- READABLE, if you have a good endurance to read it- well the problem from review is true MC is retardit seems like every time you got reincarnation everything restart to 1 for wisdom despite have 100 intelligence.you can read it after all people have their taste, but it seems im out of race in here
people are focusing on the translation too much its not good but even if you want to endure and still read itthe mc is annoying af :he has the calm and smiley attitude of 99.99% protagonistshe has the i wont do nothing till you green me attitude of 99.98% protagonistshe is naive afhe is not very intelligenteven with the best translation i dont see why anybody would read this garbage mc
To be honest, there are some parts confused me so I tried to read it a few times and I could take a grasp of what's happening. A minor grammar mistakes but you surely can improve it👍🏻
I have never seen a story with more clichés than this one.- arrogant narrow minded young masters, check- forced but shallow Lovestories, check- everyone hunting the MC, check- separation of the 2 mainleads, check- forced suppression of MC's cultivation, check(that is only 84 chapters in) This story looks more like a list of clichés that are ticked of one after another.I'm not sure why the author thinks it's good to write that way but it's his book so you do you.
Started this off thinking it was going to be a sweet story, but boy, was I wrong. Firstly, I love the slight contrast between Zarqa and Ali Baba, with Zarqa being raised by her dad while Ali Baba was being raised by his mother, both of them having lost one other parent.Secondly, this book has one of the best transitions I have ever read ok the platform. The dark elements that not only feature fantasy but also touch on the reality of humans makes this feel all the more real.I wanna rant about how well written this piece is and how authentic it feels. This is a unique take on webnovels and I've fallen in love with the book. 10000000/10🩷💯
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