The Alpha’s Curse and The Mark that Bounds Us

Simply brilliant. Creativity that rivals Tolkien, a world abound with original, terrifying creatures that audibly made me gasp SEVERAL times. The writing is enthralling, the story is compelling, the characters so full of life in a world which reflects nothing but death. But above all that, this is a novel that does not underestimate the spirit of humanity. Every character is adapting, THRIVING, in this new world. They are intelligent and invoke that familiar feeling that what you're reading is not a mere book - it takes you far away into the world that the author wants you to see, and what a glorious sight it is. You have truly created something unique, author. Cheers.

The premises of the story doesn't look too promising. 25 chapters in,  yet everything has been thoroughly repeated again and again, nothing's new. And seriously, Big Fox believed his bullsh-it about Li having a family secret or whtvr as a reason to why he could find treasures easily? And all the characters aside from the MC and his allies are drawn as dumb by the author. The story's fine, but boring as f-ck.Will probably drop or something.-----And why the hell is my reading status at ch. 9

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At first, this novel looks promising.  Super powerful beauty maid.  These powerful maids seem to be very loyal to their master(this is how the novel tries to portray).  Yet, at around chapter 28 or so, when their master was attacked, they just stand by and watch?  Their master did not say, "hey don't make a move, I will do it myself" or something like that.  They as a powerful combat maids assign to their master, seeing their master taking verbal abuse, seeing their master being attacked by those ants, yet they did nothing.  Logic is a bit weird here.  I know, the author tries to make MC show his power, but the circumstances are wrong.  This kind of situation when ants verbally abuse their master, even try to force their master hands and attack him, yet they did nothing?  Are they the master or what, they have to let their master do the dirty work himself?  Is the role opposite?  Would MC become a maid, and those maids were MC's master?  Some logic is a bit wrong here.  That is my input after reading chapter 28 or 29(and I will stop here, logic weird can't continue in order to save me from getting frustrated from not seeing or understanding the logic through).

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This is a really cool novel. Ranging from the plot to the characters, everything is relatable and likeable. The writing might be improved, but the storyline, alongside the dialogues, is absolutely amazing. It was an enjoyable read. Looking forward to more chapters!