The 100th Regression of the Max-Level Player TL

The translation is trash. This book was clearly not proof-read before being released.

OMG. I don’t know why authors prefer this type of novels with no logic. Just by reading first 10 chapters i’m so frustated and my mood turn to verse ruining my entire day.

Wow!!That was definitely a great read, This story is so lovely and 'lively' as the character gets powered up by each and every of the progressive chapter- and the #Weaktostrong features it radiates are just mind blowing.Its definitely a good recommendation for the Readers

Pretty good story. It is short but I don't think that the length does a disservice to the story. It doesn't harp on things that have no impact on the story

There's so much to cover but I can't spoil it, unfortunately! At first, I thought this was another eastern novel but I was quickly surprised with how fast the story shifted. Writing Quality: Despite the writer's first language not being English, most of the scenes are described quite well. Excellent story-telling and the dialogues are quite realistic. Remember, however, that not everything in a scene needs to be revealed to the reader, like specific locations, numbers, etc. leave a bit of imagery to the reader :)Stability of Updates: Too soon to tell but they seem to be on the right track. Just keep writing every day and try to make deadlines for yourself. My goal is 3 Chapters every day before the afternoon, practice makes perfect.Story Development: If I could go 7/5 I would! As soon as they talked about the borrowing system a few chapters in all I could think about was FMA and FMA: B regarding 'Equivalent Exchange.' I thought that was one of the most interesting concepts to ever exist in anime because the MCs aren't typically overpowered as they have to be creative with what they already have.You can already tell that the MC is crafty and resourceful, so it'll be interesting to see how he uses this new system and for what.Character Design: Excellent work describing each of the characters and making them memorable, from the names to the way they act. Bravo!World Background: I could easily visualize each place they were in, imagery is imperative in fiction and it seems like you know what you're doing -- you're already a ways ahead of your competition.In conclusion, love the book so far, love the idea, and can't wait to read more! P.S. With English being my second language I can totally relate to you as I can see the minor mistakes you're making in your work (imagery, diction, and sentence-structure wise) if you'd like to talk we can exchange discords :)

A great book with a Great System Plot I've read many Highschool DxD System boos but this is one of the best I've seen in a while. So it gets a good rating

About Plotting, Emipre building , Romance, Erotica, there are better books to read than this one .I won't recommend you to read this book, that's for sure.Massive amount of info dump since the first chapter.And the writings ticked me off. (i don't know the original writing is bad or tl is bad)It first introduce a minor character in detail (or his cursing) and then jumped into introducing his superior and then the top prisoners he is going to free one by one in detail( they are sidekicks of Oscar i guess).And jumped to a conversation between Oscar and his lackey Domingo.and then they talked about some random guy who suicide for his child to be on Amnesty Order  and this Oscar dude interrogated the prison doctor like a boss. and he ate red trout  like a boss  which his maid prepared. And it became an introduction for Oscar's awesome bg family.he is nephew of emperor etcand vidvidly introduced his sister . And then Oscar remembeing his sister, he and his maid love scene.I was like wow wth. and chapter ended with warden getting trouble with Amnesty Order of Oscar. and cursing this: "O Neil! You damn fatty! Fat pig! You devilish dude. You son of a ***** that eats ****. Do you want to fill the world of the God of Light with sin? You are the most shameless, the dirtiest and the most disgusting trash I have ever seen! You... You... You…... What you really want is my life! Oh god! Do I have to turn my back on you now?"Wow I have no idea who the f is this o neil dude and chapter ended. Thank God it ended. I don't even want to know who the f o neil is after reading one chapter.I am so tired of reading this kind of writing.Now I am thinking Oscar is MC. But Synopsis clearly claimed that O neil dude who is mentioned twice in chapter one is MC. What to do?The lines are endless. Painfully endless.Reading them feel like I am at marathon.I dont even binge read, just read them leisurely but the conversion are so awkward. Info dump after info dump.I casually read other chapters and think their character development is awkward. and story development too, lol (Actually the characters have awesome backgrounds  settings, like 90& of characters.)And the author like to write conversation among people and then bam, he explain for a 2/3 of a chapter why this is happening.If I have to nitpick, chapter names are lazy (First Episode: Chapter 1 First Episode: Chapter 6 etc)May be it is just not my kind of book. May be one man's trash is another man's treasure. :)

Everyone looks towards me surpised.