That Journey of Mine

One of my favoirite books of all tome. Aaron is such a unique character and the author crafted him so well. This is also a psychological genre that'll take you write into our protagonist's head. It's just so authentic. He is in a dark pit of despair, but can he find his light? Find out by clicking that READ!!😍

I've dropped this novel at the point when they are building the boat. I won't talk about the good parts of the story as they have been mentioned in many reviews, but only what i didn't like about it. First thing i didn't t like is the MC. His actions and they way he plays don't feel to me like an old mans at his 60s-70s, bases on how seriously he acts and plays the game. Secondly, the pacing of the story is bad. On the one hand,  the story doesnt stay stagnant and things do happen, wether its crafting, fighting or interacting with people in the game(npcs or players). On the other hand, its ~200 chapters and the GAME is not even open for the public, and from some other review its not at ~400 chapters either. Lastly, i don't like the game you created. For me multiplayer games comes hand to hand with competition, whether thats pvp or getting a first clear on a dungeon. And your game destroys any chance of competition the further it goes. You have players with literally months of advantage before the game opens, 5 of them that are destined to be the best of the 5 elements of the game from the very start and then you get all 5 of them together to form a guild. How is anyone gonna compete with that? Moreover, the "slots" for the main questline are filled before even the game goes live.The first plotline has to do about the war of two sides if dragons through their champions and 2 of the "good" ones have already been picked by chapter 200. What made me drop the novel was that lack of fairness and chance for the general player to compete for any kind of lead in the game.

I really hope they revive this novel and it get chosen for real this is a great novel and they did in no justice leaving it hanging like this

I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.

don't read it , it's unbearably stupid , the plot is the same old repetitive stuff , mc advances => something amazing happens => the mc suspect someone to be behind of it => misunderstand somebody => everyone mysterious => the same faking thing happens gets super boring

I assuming his is your first time writing, it's good.  More effort needed, except MC, other character look good to me. Story need to slow and explained. World Background null, give it a time.  

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

simply for the synopsis, I hope you continue writing though, so I can give a proper review