the Novel is great,i dont find any major problems regarding grammatical except for some minor problem including typos that i can found every now and then. story development as the author said in hos self review,a little bit slow in pace,i dont mind if u want tl slow some things to build some set up for future purpose.character design,the characters design are great,regarding their personality tho but u can try to polise ur phrase regarding what kind of situation their get that changed their feeling about mc more.updating stability is good enough as long as u dont drop this.world background,for the world background tho,i really appreciate about your slow pace novel but it will great if u can established some important rules regarding the contract first like is there any time limit for the mission? what kind of gift the curse give him? everytime i read your novel i always wondering about that.lastly i really appreciate your similar that have quite similar theme with the old good the world god only knows anime/manga,i just hope that we can see more character development from the mc tho,keep up the good work,author!
1.It is quite unbelievable plot that the big families have send their future heads/candidates in such dangerous forest without proper training. Also why are they giving guards! not only these guards are useless can't do their job, they can't even procure food.Even the suppose useless mc is more knowledgeable than them,so they also can't be proper guide. So to me the whole plot is very forced & weakly knitted. 2.Now for the mc. -A ULTIMATE SIMP-Through the whole novel he is simping over beauties.And he is so intelligent that he charges 'magically enhanced delicious food' for 3 silver, when other sells 'normal bland chicken drumsticks' for 10 silver. 3.Moreover it is also kinda 'Sign in' type novel. As we don't clearly understand how he is leveling up(I am talking about the new recipe getting not the system update with gold). Also a gourmet system where u don't even have to cook doesn't go well with me.
Novel should be put higher in the rankings. This is good novel with no typical story. I like the power system it's unique but it could be improve. Overall a good novel
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