Taming The Twin Alphas

    Author: ash_knight17
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. Potato_Big
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    To be honest, I thought Bitter Virgin was a silly title, and I almost passed it over. However, the grim tone of the synopsis caught my attention. Indeed, Bitter Virgin isn't for the weak-hearted. It delves into heavy subjects like teenage pregnancy and child sexual abuse. So, if you're not into intense topics, maybe go watch Pokémon or something.

    Story: 10
    Bitter Virgin is about enduring a dark phase of one's childhood and attempting to move forward. It's about living on despite your past seeping into your present, whether through your actions or mindset. Bitter Virgin demonstrates that it's okay to discuss that part of your childhood you wish to forget. That it's okay to accept help and keep going.

    Art: 6
    The art isn't great. But if the story outweighs the art, it doesn't matter to me. Art is merely a medium to convey the author's emotions or feelings. What matters is how effectively the work resonates with readers.

    Character: 9
    Initially, Daisuke seemed like a rebellious kid, but he's genuinely compassionate, especially when he learns of Hinako's dark secret. Making Daisuke the main character was a good choice since he represents readers as outside observers of Hinako's despair-filled past. Hinako herself illustrates that you shouldn't judge a person by their appearance, especially when you don't know what they've endured. Their relationship also highlights the healing power of understanding and kindness, which we all need more of in today's world.

    Enjoyment: 8
    I can't say I truly "enjoyed" the manga in the usual sense. It made me cry and left me with a sense of peace and hopefulness at the end, but I wasn't really happy while reading it. Instead, it evoked a variety of emotions.

    Overall: 9
    Bitter Virgin is about learning to love and trust another person again. This is depicted through Daisuke and Hinako's relationship. Bitter Virgin also serves as a catharsis for anyone who had a difficult childhood. I believe the author herself experienced a miscarriage and wrote this story to cope.

    Bitter Virgin also left a profound impact on me regarding what rape victims endure and opened up new perspectives on issues like abortion and victim-blaming, realities they face daily.

    I believe the author's deeper feelings have definitely reached her readers. Any work with such a powerful message deserves a 10. At least, that's my interpretation of Bitter Virgin.

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  1. Andreza_Shockness_67
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    Most guys will never understand the mind of a girl, and this manga serves as a perfect example of that.

    Story: 9  
    The story revolves around Suwu, who pretends to be a priest as a girl confides her dark secrets to him. Due to these dark secrets (and they are indeed quite dark), he becomes captivated by her, and an instinct to protect her kicks in for Suwu. The complication is that the girl doesn't know Suwu is aware, and other girls at his school become envious of the attention Suwu gives to her.

    This plot begins with a lie, a common storytelling device, and a very predictable one at that. I can honestly say the story felt rather standard, following what seemed like a preset love triangle (or square) based on a lie. This doesn't mean the story wasn't entertaining; it was just fairly predictable.

    The pacing was fast, possibly because I was bored at night and couldn't sleep, so I quickly read through this manga. This fast pace wasn't bad at all; it worked well with the story.

    Art: 7  
    The art was pretty good but not exceptional. I really enjoyed the design for all four main characters, although the female protagonist looked a bit plain (her dark secrets make up for that).

    There was only one issue I had with the art: the first (and only) action scene. It wasn't poorly drawn, but I had to go over it multiple times to understand what happened.

    Character: 8  
    I loved the main female protagonist. She was innocent mentally but non-innocent physically. She was a great character with a lot of depth. Her emotions were portrayed well, and I can imagine how a girl might act if she went through the terrible experiences she has.

    The male protagonist wasn't my cup of tea. He was so obsessed with the girl. The only problem for me is that I don't know if this is a good or bad thing! THIS DRIVES ME CRAZY. I understand that he wants to protect her, so it's okay to obsess over her, but it's also creepy. I don't know. I might be the only one thinking this way.

    Enjoyment: 9  
    I honestly wasn't expecting the dark secret. I saw a review of it (only yesterday) and quickly read the synopsis without giving it much thought. By the fourth page, I was completely shocked, like seriously WTF. I kept reading, and it kept getting more interesting, even though it was predictable. As with other mangas, I even expressed vocally how shocked or happy I was with some parts.

    Overall: 8  
    This was a quick but great read. Very enjoyable, and I wish there would be more.
  1. BraidennovelfaB
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    Bitter Virgin is an incredibly challenging manga to review. I genuinely appreciated this manga, yet I couldn't say I enjoyed it—it was extremely stressful to read, particularly due to personal experiences. It presents a very intriguing premise and delves into highly sensitive subjects such as sexual abuse, toxicity, jealousy, and unwanted pregnancies. All of these are very real issues. While there are elements in the manga that appear straightforward to resolve, in reality, they're exceedingly complex. Nonetheless, the manga addresses these topics in a more mature manner than anticipated. It effectively portrays the suffering caused by abuse rather than downplaying it, showing how this trauma can leave lasting impacts that are hard to overcome. Still, 32 chapters seemed insufficient to tackle such a complicated subject, but the mangaka did an admirable job.  
      
    From a technical standpoint, I quite admired the art style; the characters were easily distinguishable, which isn't always the case in other manga. This clarity ensures you don't get confused about who's speaking. The character backstories were somewhat lacking, except for Aikawa's, who, being the main character and central figure of the entire manga, has a developed past, albeit not extensively. And I partly appreciate this approach—it was difficult to witness the panel illustrations where her mother beats her and refuses to believe she was abused by her partner, or the scenes where the stepfather leaves her bleeding. It was truly tough for me, so I'm uncertain whether it's a drawback that the backstory lacks further development beyond what's essential to the narrative.  
      
    Concerning the characters, I appreciated that each one possesses a human personality, traits that are plausible to encounter in real life. Personally, I identified strongly with Daisuke; his actions throughout the story mirrored my own when I encountered individuals similar to Aikawa. That's a significant advantage—it's a thoroughly realistic manga that doesn't shy away from harsh realities. I highly recommend this manga. It explores deeply sensitive and profound issues from a relatively mature perspective, though it's certainly not suitable for those with trauma. I would never suggest this manga to someone who has experienced abuse, as it could be excruciating. Even I, having not endured such situations, found it arduous to read. I can't imagine how it might affect someone who has lived through these experiences—it could reopen old wounds.  
      
    Considering everything outlined in the preceding paragraphs, I rate this work a 9/10.
  1. CodyKinney
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    This is the best manga I've read so far.  
    It's IMPOSSIBLE to find characters like these in reality, especially Suwa Daisuke. The guy is fit for a god. The story begins like a typical shoujo manga but becomes extremely mature as it progresses.  
    Plus, it can be kind of depressing at times because there seems to be some sort of tragedy around every corner. However, it's a must-read for every manga fan.
  1. FictionalJack
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    This is the 'A Crow Looked At Me' by Mount Eerie album in manga form  

    What happens when a truly crushing reality of the darkest aspects of humanity intertwines with a standard coming-of-age romance? Well, I would probably say this story is the closest fit to it.  

    The main protagonist (Suwa) is a wannabe womanizer who accidentally hears his timid classmate's absolutely harrowing past full of sexual assault, trauma, and guilt while hiding in a confession booth. The setup is pretty good, and the story that follows is engrossing. It moves at a steady pace, and I was never bored with it, which would be an issue for such a short series.  

    The art is pretty consistently above average but nothing mind-blowing. However, I will give credit to Kusunoki for their ability to express shock and guilt on facial expressions, which is worth noting. Aside from that, nothing crazy.  

    The main aspect that I find issue with is the characters. Suwa is shown at first to be selfish and a womanizer but is later revealed to be a pretty selfless and caring person through empathizing with the other main character, Hinako Aikawa.  
    Hinako, sadly, is more or less a summation of the things that have happened to her rather than a character who had these things occur in her life. Aside from being a victim of sexual assault, she is not shown to have many interests or character quirks other than falling for who she falls for. Which brings me to my next issue with another character.  

    Holy shit, Ibuse was unbearable. She had no character other than being madly in love with Suwa. Even though they barely had a surface-level conversation? I guess she can be classified more as a stalker, but then why would Suwa bother to even entertain her intentions, as she is clearly psychotic, and Suwa is likely aware of this even before he meets his love interest.  
    I don't have much to say about Yuzu; she was fine, I guess.  

    I'm giving a special section to Izumi Suwa. Easily the best character in this story. Between choosing to keep her child on her own terms, even if the father chose not to be there because of the circumstances leading to the pregnancy, and living as a single mother without seeing a problem with being one because she wants to love the child as much as she possibly can, she stands out. Being an awesome older sister when Ibuse stalks Suwa home and she calls her out, while still trying to appeal to her humanity and flawed character as an obsessive adolescent, makes her shine.  

    *** SPOILERS ***  

    The scene where Izumi has her stillbirth is haunting. Absolutely tragic. The panel of her wailing as her child was delivered dead, holding onto it as it goes from warm to cold, holy fuck. And when she asks Suwa if he wants to hold it. Let me say, as someone who has been in this position before, I had to put the story down for a while. And to then go over how even after the stillbirth happens, the process of the medical procedures and check-ups afterward, and the psychological effects of it, I think this was handled incredibly well.  

    Overall, I recommend this story. Would I say I enjoyed it? I can't say I did. I don't think this is a story to be enjoyed, as this is a dark and bleak story that tells of finding solace in the face of absolutely harrowing circumstances. Again, I find it similar to the album "A Crow Looked at Me" by Mount Eerie for those who are familiar.
  1. Isiah9672
    Isiah9672 rated it
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    This is a highly popular manga, and I aim to offer a contrasting perspective in my review.  

    Story - I wouldn't rank "Bitter Virgin" exceptionally high. It tackles a very serious subject, which is undeniably intriguing, but there are aspects that may invite criticism. The narrative centers on a girl who was abused by her stepfather. Consequently, she harbors a fear of men until she encounters Daisuke.  

    That alone presents an immense challenge for both her and Daisuke to navigate. Yet, as if this weren't sufficient, additional complications arise in her life. I felt it was somewhat excessive and occasionally fell into clichés. Writing about "abuse" is inherently challenging, with a significant risk of resorting to overused tropes. It's also relatively easy to evoke readers' emotions with such a sensitive topic. Who wouldn't be moved by the suffering and experiences of an abused child? This is why I generally steer clear of stories—whether manga, short stories, or novels—that address such themes unless they are exceptionally well-written or present the issue in a unique manner.  

    There is an element of the ending that left me unsatisfied. I can't elaborate due to spoiler restrictions, but it pertains to the characters' reasoning and their perception of their relationship. The characters' reactions throughout the story are largely believable, except for their concluding thoughts. These lack consistency with how they previously handled situations, particularly in Daisuke's case. It's a minor detail that could have been resolved with a slight adjustment in phrasing, allowing them to express doubt or curiosity about the future rather than unwavering certainty regarding its outcome.  

    Nevertheless, despite these minor objections, I believe the manga was solid overall. The artwork was decent (not extraordinary but satisfactory), the plot flowed smoothly, and the characters were well-developed—not just the two protagonists, but all of them, save for the inconsistency I noted at the story's conclusion. Ultimately, I'd assign "Bitter Virgin" a score of 6.  

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  1. Endratox
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    I picked this up on a whim, and honestly, I deeply regret it. "Bitter Virgin" is so poorly written that it actually left me offended.  

    The premise initially seemed interesting: a girl named Hinako works to overcome the horrific abuse she endured at the hands of her stepfather. However, Hinako isn't even the main character. Instead, we're stuck with Daisuke, your typical average guy from seinen stories. Shockingly, the plot unfolds in a painfully familiar harem style. We're introduced to a couple of additional potential love interests—a cute childhood friend and a haughty, clingy type. Both are inexplicably infatuated with Daisuke—one to the extent that she threatens actual, not-played-for-laughs violence against rival Hinako.  

    This all becomes incredibly uncomfortable to witness because Hinako isn't allowed to exist as her own person. She has no interests, hobbies, or unique personality traits. She's solely defined by what was done to her, and later, by her connection to Daisuke. Due to her lack of development, the scenes involving her trauma come off as cheap and exploitative.  

    That said, I believe the author genuinely intended to create something thought-provoking. It seems she simply lacked the skill to break away from overused tropes and stock characters.  

    I urge anyone reading this to take the time to educate themselves about violence against women.
  1. BkVybez
    BkVybez rated it
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    Edit: I am keeping this review as it's my first one from way back in 2011. If I were to revisit this manga today, my opinion might shift, and I may not rate it as highly anymore.  

    Hello, this is my very first review—it's brief but completely spoiler-free. I'm sharing this because I genuinely want others, regardless of gender, to experience this manga. It truly imparts a profound lesson about appreciating life more fully and recognizing the value in what we're given. After all, whenever we receive something, we should cherish it, knowing how fortunate we are to have it in our lives. :)  

    I'm particularly glad that when I first began reading it, I had only skimmed half of the summary. As a result, I wasn't aware of the "secret" surrounding the main female character. Initially, I assumed it was just another typical romance manga, so I flipped through the early pages casually, planning to decide whether to keep reading or drop it once I discovered her "secret." But boy, was I mistaken! This manga turned out to be absolutely fantastic—IMO, OUTSTANDING! (By the way, a rating of 10 means nothing less than extraordinary!)  

    What struck me most was how the male protagonist gradually grew to care deeply for the girl after uncovering her secret, even though he didn't fully realize at first that he was falling in love with her. Their interactions were incredibly endearing—his frequent blushing whenever she appeared was utterly adorable. The female lead, too, was an intriguing blend of fragility and strength. It's difficult to articulate without revealing spoilers, so you'll just have to discover it yourself. Additionally, the subplot involving the male protagonist's sister resonated with me profoundly; it was truly moving.  

    In any case, if you're looking for a short yet meaningful read that encourages deeper appreciation for life's blessings, then don't hesitate—dive into this manga right away. Alternatively, read until you uncover the secret and make your decision then. If possible, avoid reading the summary altogether and let the story surprise you on its own terms. :)
  1. RomanWordsworth
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    The story could have benefited from a few more chapters to enhance its appeal. In the first chapter, everything was introduced all at once, feeling rather scattered. It comes as a surprise to the reader. Only afterward does the narrative begin to unfold. The theme or topic of the story was exceptional, but it could have been developed far better. The main character overcame her fears much too effortlessly, leaving numerous questions unanswered that could have been addressed nicely in the later chapters or amidst the plot.  

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  1. Xellos1248
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    This manga is a stunning work with a truly distinctive storyline. The protagonist, Aikawa, boasts an exceptionally crafted personality and backstory, while the male lead, Suwa, exudes sweetness. This manga evokes deep empathy for the main characters, especially Aikawa.  

    I adore this romance—how Aikawa's journey transforms her from a girl merely pursuing Suwa into someone deeply in love without even realizing it herself, and how Suwa reshapes Aikawa's perspective on men and love. Overall, I've fallen head over heels for this manga, as it was the first shojo manga I ever read (I wasn't a huge fan of shojo before this).  

    The narrative is beautifully complemented by the romantically detailed backgrounds and characters, adhering to traditional shojo themes but with a whimsical and enchanting artistic style.  

    The only drawback to this story is the inconsistent release rate of scanlations—they are quite slow, but in my opinion, they're absolutely worth the wait.  

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  1. MdAbulBashar0154
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    <p>When I began reading this manga, I assumed it would be just another high school romance story... but I was genuinely surprised after getting through a few more chapters. The story is incredibly controversial, and I think the author has hit the nail right on the head with this plot. What pleased me even more is that this storyline is actually quite common in my country, yet people don't pay as much attention to it as they should. This manga vividly details the entire process of being pregnant as a teenager. I also appreciate how one of the characters challenges God, which, in my opinion, could be quite shocking to some readers... but I enjoyed it because it reflects reality—there are indeed many people who question the existence of God. Anyway, this manga portrays a real-life experience! It's neither fantasy nor boring in the slightest!</p>
  1. Ethernal7
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    tl;dr: A manga with josei-like elements that delves into traumatic events and their effects on relationships, offering an engaging yet emotional narrative but featuring underdeveloped characters.  

    This manga is technically labeled as seinen, but its tone and presentation feel more akin to shoujo or josei manga with a male protagonist at the center. This includes the way characters act, how situations are framed, and how drama unfolds. While this isn't inherently negative, it aligns with a style I'm not particularly fond of, so keep that bias in mind. The story is deeply character-driven, making the strength of its characters crucial to its success. However, the main couple lacks significant development themselves; instead, their relationship evolves primarily due to interactions with other characters and impulsive decisions they make in response. There's a semblance of a love quadrangle, though it never fully materializes because the two additional participants remain out of focus and inconsistent.  

    On the brighter side, the subplot involving Daisuki's sister stands out as particularly effective. Despite the main couple being mere observers, her arc is heart-wrenchingly emotional and clearly influences their dynamics moving forward. Unfortunately, the conclusion feels disappointingly anticlimactic. It wraps up in a predictably generic manner, leaving little room for surprise. Adding to this letdown, the ending emphasizes peripheral characters speculating about the relationship's potential failure, which oddly detracts from any meaningful resolution without adding depth or bittersweet nuance. Lastly, the art adheres to typical shoujo/josei aesthetics, which don't particularly resonate with me unless executed by CLAMP.  

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