Welp! First 4 chapters are done and I can't deny that it's written smoothly. I'm intrigued, very much so✨~ I like the flow so far so I know this will make me wait for the future chaps with full anticipation 💕#Support, support, support!#Go_Author!
This has been a long time coming can't wait to see what Zent does with this novel after all ToS was great and with the year extra experience under his belt Zent will be able to do a lot better with this one. Still ToS is amazing as well. Anyway I know this is going to be a good one (that will also hurt my coin pouch)
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We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do I (do I)A full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching, but you're too shy to say it (say it)Inside, we both know what's been going on (going on)We know the game and we're gonna play itAnd if you ask me how I'm feelingDon't tell me you're too blind to seeNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching, but you're too shy to say it (to say it)Inside, we both know what's been going on (going on)We know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you
The intro is very well thought of and so is the protagonist. The story has quite a smooth flow, so well done that. Just a suggestion, it might be a good idea to put a TW before talking about suicide as it is quite a sensitive topic.
I have read the first five chapters and I've got to say, it's the most unique realistic story out here in my opinion. Most of the stories are are romance but this story is seemingly taking things beyond. I was hooked in this story from the start. Reyansh is an extremely likeable protagonist and for someone who had mental issues, I can understand him a lot as well. Those inner monologues add a lot of depth of his character as well!Aryan, though, looks scum. I find him a lot interesting as well! I want to know more about him!My second favourite thing in the story so far is the amazing use of symbolism. In Chapter 2, the butterfly symbolism to symbolize Reyansh's future growth was beautifully written and in Chapter 4, the use of Anemone flower to symbolize (maybe) Vansh saving him from hopelessness or maybe some kind of anticipation regarding the two characters? He is my second favourite character so far and I really can't wait to read more!
I thank you very much for your support and I know you like it, so soon I will bring you its second edition for my loyal fans, they want a lot of enjoyment. of my books and I hope God willing I will bring you more books and versions of it thank you
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