Sword Legacy

It's good. The writing is decent (but could be improved). The story is focused on romance (which is always welcomed). His disciples aren't all or majority females who are in love with him (which I noticed a lost of these kind of stories have a tendency to do). He's not overt with his abilities though that might not be for long considering this latest chapter. The cultivation is very convoluted and confusing. Why didn't they just go with the generic cultivation system. One annoying thing is how the writer keeps on shoving it in your face that the MC is a genius. "but of course Li blah blah is x100 time more talented so his cultivation and learning is way faster so he learnt this in half a day even though it would take them years" on repeat. Keep in mind they are talking about so called S and SS-class talents. I'm just waiting for the story to introduce SSSSS-class talents at this point. This talent system is going to become redundant at some point honestly.

So,far book is looking good to me.But it is still too early to judge the characters.World background is superb.Hopefully,author will not drop it midway.

This novel is fun, usual transmigration into the game world but with gatcha and summoning powers, there are many novels similar to this and all of them are dropped, i hope webnovel pick this is up so we can see the ending XDmc talks too much and most of them chapters are wasted on his inner thoughts and calculation and kinda dense and a bit stupid, may be itll improve in future, not much explained about power levels or the background as most chapters wasted on his inner ramblings.side characters or his harem which fortunately have their own personalities despite coming as 100% loyal to mc and also has their backstory (not explained much in these 60 chapters)dont know why is it rated low but other cultivation novels with same revenge and trash young masters rated 5 stars XD [people are fuked up]Overall this is an interesting NOveL

A dual cultivation sign-in novel.... could be interesting, but will depend on how much work the other puts into thr story development. Will give it thr benefit of the doubt and hope it gets picked.

Okay I'm going to be the first one to review this. The story is good but has to be better. And it only has 20 chapters if you can write more it would be better.

"Hoshizora." was all she said before planting the zanpakuto in the snow and disappearing in blue flame. Then darkness covered my vision again

"I have only added in a few extra artistic twists to the basic facts except for the fake appointment to see Dr Liu, everything is the truth. You have hemophobia and you should really go and see a doctor. You should learn to relax to relieve your abnormal mental stress. I have not yet mentioned your elderly probia to that old woman. During your conversation with her, you experienced symptoms like heart palpitation, stomachache, cold sweats, cold hands and feet including numbness in the face. Look, all these are facts, right? In addition, if you really want to see Dr Liu, I can help you to register and jump the queue."

Blue gave me the Ball and said "He's all yours now