I liked how the author paced the story. This is the one thing that is hard to see in the many stories here in Webnovels. Things are flowing smoothly and the events shift properly. it's not all over the place unlike some of the stories I had read. The narration and dialogues used was not forced and it gave life to the characters. I look forward to seeing more of this wonderful novel. More power to the Author.
I've read some novels with a gaming and adventure genre but I could say that this one by far is the most unique and interesting I've seen! It isn't your typical MC road-to-invincibility sort of thing plus there's also the witty jokes here and there. Good job author I'll be looking foward to more chapters!
I read to chapter five, and I can already tell that it's just a generic wish-fulfillment story. So far, we have gotten introduced to the main character, a random country bumpkin. He sees a cute girl on the train, and she ends up talking to him because she is nice. He then states that he will make lots of money, get multiple wives, and go to university because his village chief said to do so. He acts extremely arrogant about this, naturally frustrating the girl. Then he reads her palm and sees that they are "compatible" then he demands that she be his first wife. The girl didn't like this, and neither did two men near her. But what's this?! the men are dying? Good thing that the MC has the ability to cure anything using traditional Chinese medicine, which is lost to time, for no explained reason. He then tells them the only way he will treat them is if his "First Wife" tells him to. She reluctantly does so, then after he treats them in some ridiculous ways, the girl all of a sudden is in love with him, feeling jealous that he hadn't gotten her number yet.As I said, I can already tell this is generic wish fulfillment, so if you enjoy that you might like this.
I loved the story, all the character so far are well builded and even thought we are talking a military and war novel, we can see that the author knows that we need some drama, romance, comedy and relaxed times while reading a novel. The author so far sounds that he knows exactly what he wants about this novel, and this can change the quality of the novel by tenfold. Thank you for the good work
I like how you write horror and thriller moment in this one.Its simple and neat, that I can understand immediately without thinking to much.As soon as you read, the mystery already started.
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