Surrender to Her

It's the title for me. Kudos to the author

The overall story theme is childish and full of vanity for me who is interested in developmental issues..But, the writing is good and the author is committed to the story.

Really poor translation quality makesvthe story basically unreadable. The rest of this review will be filler for the character requirements. ggggggggggggggggggvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

I haven’t read it yet but I lovethe story description😂😂                                                                                 

this is good but how is it r-18 I haven't seen any mature content in any sort of ways or is it in the future that it'll happen                                                                                                ?

One of my best readers in a long time.I hope that the author never drops this novel.Hail hydra.                                                               

Can't wait for more I really think that if more people were aware of the 40k worlds this could easily be in the top 20 or even the top 10. The chapters are of a nice size that you get in to it and there is still lots left in the chapter. The grammar it in the top ten of all books on Webnovel and top three for originals. I can see that you have put a lot of effort into this when this is finished I think that it will be just as good as the other 40k books in quality gust like "The Blood Angels omnibus- by James swallow". Thanks I am anticipating more chapters. And I loved the "We" never took notice of it until it was mentioned. Keep writing you are a great writer just keep writing and it will start to be seen more and start to snowball.