Saw the word “The” and automatically thought this was going to be the best story ever to be read but you started with the word “THE” you wouldn’t believe the disappointment I felt when I saw the word “The” I expected way better for the start of the story this makes me feel so damn underwhelming reading the story that starts with ”the” Out of everything?! The? Could’ve been “At the start” anything else my nga! the? Could’ve used that or they or it! But the? The most used portal sentence of a word?? Sincerely sent by iPhone of Alan and Layla. Xxx
A well written with a good pacing of the story and interesting as well as intense scenes with every chapter. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.
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