Supreme Ascendant System

please continue writing this novel ,it was well made and the plot and pacing is good

The Story is well written. I like that the MC is not way to OP like in other stories. Comfy pace. However you should try to upload more frequently.

way to much focus on non mc character I hate the Thomas character

Story straight up makes no sense. Author clearly does not know what story passing and proper development is, and cannot properly narrate the story as their is a lack of explanation for the plot. Simply put only the author would truly understand the story, since whatever the story is only fully narrated in his head. Overall: Garbage tier writing/execution.

You know, for a book with a simple and sleezy premise it has a lot of good moments. Frankly it feels a lot like the author makes it up as they go along, but so Ling as they keep their facts straight (and they do for the most part) it's ok. The main character is a very flawed person, which is slightly refreshing from the standard goody two shoes.My biggest complaint is that the actual story doesn't start until about the halfway mark. The writing before that is important context but the main story doesn't start till midway in the book.Overall I'd say a worthwhile read. An author more talented than I was expecting

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I think this is a really interesting book I can't wait to read more chapters I would definitely recommend that people read this book. you are doing so well baby keep up the good work ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

The story is interesting but it’s not my kind of story. All the best author 👍🏻