Sunkissed Solangelo

"What the…" Cliff thought to himself. There was no sign of the car, no sign of Sarah. The entirety of his surroundings was white. Was something wrong with hi eyes? Did he lose his eyesight in the crash? No… It didn't seem like he had gone blind. It was more like he couldn't see properly. Focusing hard, colours began to swim into focus.  After a few moments the colours began to blurrily take form.

"...do you know where my horse is?"

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A little too much, and a little too often.

Pretty good! I just kinda stumbled along this, not been on the site for long but I like eating up webnovels like this. A little interesting, definitely a bit better written than some other webnovels I’ve seen. I like the characters already. A bit heavy handed on the smut off the bat, you could probably make a decent pornographic short story with that kinda stuff (lol).All in all, I do like it. Setting is your classic fantasy setting. Humans are numerous and racist (as they should be). MC is half-beast instead of full human. I smell a harem coming on, though I would prefer it small if only to save the author a headache in the future to try to remember all the characters they’d make. In some stories, there’s so many characters that they all feel one dimensional. It’s best to flesh out few main characters than millions.Looking forwards to see where this goes.