Sunkissed Solangelo

I love the way the chapters are organized Nice writing style and story ideaThis novel has great potentialsWorth the read!Thumbs up to the author for a job well done

Writing Quality⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐World Background⭐⭐I tried really hard to like this story.My biggest problem with the story is that it feels like its going nowhere.I feel like MC has no goal like noting to go for there also seems to be no enemy. So we just wave along with whatever is going on.I read like 270 chapters in 2 days and i can sum up what happens in a few lines.I feel like there is no substance in this story. MC just does stuff that's about it.We barley see MC fight we have noting to root for i think there are like 15 fighting chapters maybe less where MC is fighting. And when a fight happens MC is NEVER there. He is always comprehending some ****ty law or cultivation or whatever.So we get like 6-7 chapters of forgotten characters that fight and get like 1-2 where MC does something. MC also vanishes from the story for like 5+ chapters and we are like why do we need this info again?There are also some really stupid stuff going on like:- MC fell 5 minute's straight and had no injury what so ever (he was like just starting to cultivate to)Then he uses all his qi to fly up and he could not go more then 50m and fell down again.But 2 days later he can fly all the way up (like 300km) I think he was 8 grade mortal to like 5 grade second thingySo you are telling me he has 600 times more Qi now then he had b4?(also does not take him long to get to the top)-MC is flying up a mountain 15000feed (less then 5km) but it takes him 5h so you are saying me he is flying 5x slower then the average human walks?Then the next time he is flying super fast again its all over the place.He could fly 300km up a pit but he can't fly for a few km again next time cuz his Qi was out when he has allot more Qi now.-And don't get me started on the trails / dreams / ... we get like chapters upon chapters of random filler character fighting we never see again.-And After his first trail they said he will need to do another one at 20% of his bloodline yet now it looks like he will need to do it at 5% for no reason whatsoever.-... ...Then lets talk about MC.- He is fairly stupid makes retarded mistakes (obv stuff)- Should act evil when he acts more normal barley kills anyone - Cultivates like a hard demon cultivation thingy when all it accomplishes is to restrict mc do do certain stuff.-Also i was hoping for there to be some romance but MC is a blockheadAlso don't get me started on MC secrecy. Hides his cultivation from his family for 270 chapters when all they do is worrie for him. Like they are not bad people like you might think they will backstab him or whatever.Even if its only to his grandpa & mother but NOOO he can't tell them shit . They took care of him when he was a retard for 6 years then again when he was training (aka not moving) for another 3/4 years. Yet he can't tell them he is strong and moving all over the place they still think he is a weak shit.We also know noting abut the world. Like all i can say you is eummm i think there are more continents.oo Yea and the last one, there is so much F I L L E RIdk there is so much more that pisses me off but ill stop here.

keep going and don't drop this novel I really like it.........................................................................................

In the first few chapters aren't that good. but after the chapter 10 the story progress,the chapter 17 is the best way to put it. author keep it up

can't really bring myself to like it. first chapter writing quality was nice, but later on everything became too rushed. actions that mc took didnt have any reason behind them. i mean in first few chapters mc suddenly gets himself a girl, learns magic, is talent poached by king and so on. premise by itself is really interesting, but story isnt living up to it. :(

The title and book cover attracted me, and I can say the Author prepared for this very well. I like how she write the story, Very well written. This novel is gold. Hope to see more chapters 🙂

is it possible for you to restart this novel again actually i had high expectation from this novel the way you started it but everything crumble when you stopped this novel 10 months ago

The first chapter was good. It made me want more but sadly, that eas the only chapter. Good job!👍👍