Sueños y Escarcha

same here why does the boys have to do everything to get the why can't the girls fight fight her love and themselves

Sou brasileiro e não sou bom em inglês...  Essa é minha primeira avaliação e pode faltar algumas coisas. A história está muito boa até aqui (ch42) o protagonista está equilibrado mas não consegui perceber o por que de outros personagens que apareceram até agora ter alguma estatística em "S".  Fora isso acho bem interessante a forma como abordou  diversos assuntos e esperava ver um pouco mais sobre questões raciais (o que não é totalmente opção do autor, então tanto faz).É uma boa leitura leve e que da pra maratonar facilmente sem perceber o tempo, só espero que não acabe tendo um fim abrupto e que o autor saiba continuar equilibrando o MC.English:I'm Brazilian and I'm not good at English ... This is my first assessment and there may be some things missing. The story is very good so far (ch42) the protagonist is balanced but I could not understand why other characters that have appeared so far have some "S" statistics. Other than that I find it very interesting the way he approached several subjects and hoped to see a little more about racial issues (which is not entirely up to the author, so whatever).It is a good light reading and you can marathon easily without realizing the time, I just hope it doesn't end up having an abrupt end and that the author knows how to continue balancing the MC.

Very good quality of every aspect and very enjoyable with a good development and belivable but funny characters.If i were to add anything it would more grinding for levels

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Well, what can i say, everything is good so far, just waiting for more chap~ hehehe and INCEST IS WINCEST BABY!!! Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~

I like the blurb. I like the characters but I can’t fall in love with them. I can’t lose myself in their world because as of chapter 140 the author just tells us what is happening. They don’t show us. It’s a shame because this novel has the bones to be great. Author, create more dialogue. Stop summarizing the story and let us see/experience the scenes. I don’t want Ichi to tell me something happened, write the scene out.Hopefully, you will take my advice bc this really could be a fantastic read.

I think I can see where thr story is going and I love it. It is a new take on the genre and it is what I have been lookong for. The only critique (if you can even call it that 😓) is that the tragedy aspecg seems a little forced but other than that I love it 👍

The sound of the car farting stops as Mom parks it outside of our house and turns it off. I can feel tears burning in my eyes, but when Mom worriedly reaches out to touch my shoulder, I jerk away.