STRIP FA ME BABY[ a pop smoke story]

Very good first chapter ca envisages a good for the following and I hope to have a big revenge from the protagonist carrement I had tears for him if there is an adaptation in webtoon I will be the first to see the pictures I hate to see how it will return.

The story was great but the language used isn't suitable for place. Seriously? Mexican call American country as Light country . But for overall is good. keep up👍

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

I could use a little fuel myself

Elsa:ok-_-

Hello Author Pen,From the first few chapters that I have read I can say that it's a engaging story, esp with the start and how you introduced comedy side to a xianxia novel. I really like it and it's new. The writing is so well done it's very easy to understand and it's engaging.

I understand that webnovel doesn’t have a very good system for gender bender novels, but since for most of the novel the mc is female, I think the book should be in the female lead category rather than the male lead one, though I’m not sure if it is possible for the author to change that after initially selecting the male lead option.

Rough around the edges, but overall it's interesting enough to give readers a good read.The world building could've been great, but the author gives us confusing infos, there're gods, but how many? What do you get from a convenant with a God? What kind of instrument are there? What are the effect of each instrument? The system/levels? Are some questions that might surface when you read this novel.Character-wise they're great, the emotion of each meeting and separation could be felt easily.Plot-wise is already good coupled with the world building.Honestly, the lore/world is interesting if you could spare a few braincells to visualize this story as a blank paper. Just imagine the world, by each word, don't put in any visualization you might have from cultivation novels. Think of this one as a western novel.