The quality of the writing is over all alright there are a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing that can't be over looked. The stability of the updates is pretty consistent so not much to complain about. The real downfall of this story is the characters and their development, and by development I mean the lack of it. The characters frankly are boring and very 2d most of their personalities can be described with a few words such as, mean and money hungry, talented and ignorant, genius and quiet, and for Ao he has nothing other than being the only other guy in the story. The story development is also very bad it is mostly the same over used jokes and the protagonist getting bullied by his so called friends. The Mc is supposed to be smart but then makes the same mistakes over and over again, and then it is just labeled as a joke. The one thing that makes the Mc unique, other than his race, is almost instantly given to his friends and they are only slightly slower than the "genius" mc. This story had so much potential, and I really enjoyed it at the stat but then the repetition of the same thing made the story get old real quick. As a suggestion to the author pleased do not keep forcing the same jokes, build on the characters more, give something to make the mc unique again, other than his race, allow the mc to grow and learn from his mistakes instead of repeating them. These are just a few things that could be done to improve the over story. Once again I love the concept of the story and the beginning was great, it just never let the characters to be built cause it to get boring really quickly.
Came from legion, loved the beginning of the book Looking forward to more Will update rating when the updates become little more frequent Keep up the good work Biako
Just in the last month, this is the third copy cat of WBMA. These copycats bring shame to the original.The original is just called World's Best Martial Artist and that's it. It's one of the best novels of 2020. Worlds merging theme where humanity is struggling for survival (hence why no fights in initial chapters, it's built up for future fortress defenses, battles, skirmishes, wars etc), long chapters, good humour, solid world building, interesting cheat, lifelike side characters - some felt more of MC than MC himself when he was still growing, and he even treated some of them as his role model that he wanted to surpass. They have their own MC halo. And much more
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What a great story!!!!. I really like this story.Leo isa calm cunning and shrewd and amazing person.I like him very much.I think he was an older and experienced man in his first life.It will help him his current time.By the way You are a talented writer.I am looking forward to read your story.I am glad you didn't give this up.Good luck Thanks.
Reviewing after reading a few chapters...This novel really packs a punch. It does not hold back with its bluntness, and it is highly informative to boot. The personality of the author shows in his writing, and I personally believe we can be friends irl with his perspective. I like the historical references, and I like how the narration points out the absurdity of some, or most, of them. The storytelling feeds you something, and you can easily digest it no problem. I admit, I'm also a sucker for the comedic elements of this novel. Well done, Mr. Author.
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