Stranded with the Campus Belle: Our Deserted Island Survival

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You have an interesting take on storytelling but your needs to be edited further so your readers won't be distracted while reading. It's good of you to ask for feedback and I truly hope your work will get better because of those. :)

Raw title: 超时空评测Status: 415 Chapters (Completed)..............................................................................................................................................

I really like this novel but today whenever I try to click in to read a chapter I'm unable to get to it this is the second novel on webnovel.com that I've had this issue.

Awesome story! I hope to read more of this let's go make it happen, daily updates woooot! what a good read. Following this and recommending it.

I really love this book.  Do anybody knows its raw version?  Do dragons and pigeon have same shape? this is actually awesome book.Wow girlfriend's is also awesome? Divine creature in normal world or is it going to be awakening world or what? I am really exited.

Was interesting for a while but then took a nose dive. MC becomes extremely strong through the tutorial tower, gets out, then meets his parents who abandoned him and gets caputered, despite his numerous skills and strengh. There were a few things I found weird and didnt really make sense, like him becoming a girls teacher after 2 seconds, but this was by far the worse, and comoletely moronic. Dropped.

I give this the big good award. Writing quality - havent found any grammar mistakes so 5/5 thereStory development - i like how the pacing has been til chap 15, not to fast and not too slow. just hope he doesnt skip his childhood years like so many others do. Character design - they're good... it seems like. tho that might change once there are more characters introducedWorld Background - sort of uniqe? idk it seems familiar but also not, but i dont have anything bad to say about it so its atleast good enoughlooking forwards to read this book. The only thing i might not like about it is that the system is not universal for everyone, then it feels like way to much of a cheat in my opinion. however i wont drop a good book because of something like that. Gl with your writing author :D