To many holes in the writing... there could be improvements, but the jumps are bad, the mc is trash because everything seem to be rushed and random in the story... I read up to 176 chapters and I think I am dropping this... good luck.
I can't complain about the writing quality and the world development seems interesting enough, but the character development is terrible and the plot seems pretty forced. The story hooked me with the "reincarnation as another species" line, but instantly unhooked me the moment I found out that the entire plot seems to be focused on what would happen if a wolf acted and behaved like a human with sub-par intelligence, blind loyalty, and a habit to disregard any and all logical decisions when left with a pretty human face.At this rate, he might as well have reincarnated into a housecat or a poodle capable of doing card tricks with all the relevance that this plot point has.
this sound like it will be and amazing story but I am wondering why is there any chapters did you give or just left it on hatius I hope you can create more chapters
Tis not bad and to be honest, it's better than some that I've seen on here so I'll give this story a fairly good rating mostly because the plot isn't bad, but it's also generic. But overall it is ok....at least to me
very entertaining. it has had me at the edge of my seat wanting more and more. I love the perspective of it. sci-fi meets medival fantasy and magic blended together perfectly. Looking forward to how the story develops further. Keep up the amazing job!
Its a pretty good book its a lot like The bloodline system, however the MC isn't instantly over powered and doesn't revolve around space and space travel. This story has a nice pace to it is written well. The people around MC are not just empty NPCs they feel like people as well which isn't that easy. Anyway keep up the good work look forward to reading more.
Male Lead rapes the female lead, doesn’t feel sorry about it, it’s treated as “they had sex”. It’s messed up. Also, it’s free elsewhere, but after reading that, who cares? Really, is it that hard to understand that rape is bad? Also, the author constantly uses rape to point out “this character is a bad guy!” as if there’s no other way to show that; does the author have a rape fetish? Seriously, don’t read this garbage.
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