Steadfed Dairy

Honestly I kept skipping this book when it cam up on my recommendations. I regret tgat I kept skipping it because this is a really good book. At first the writing was a bit touchy in places, but it got better over time. The story plot is really good as well. I still have not found out what the brother's IGN is yet, and I cant wait. There are times where I think there was too much information overload. For example, seeing all that information on his status. Other than that the story flows really well.

Alright, let me start off with some deserved praise. The story is good, I almost got hooked to it. The plot is heading in a very interesting way, and you did a good job building a not-so-cliche background of the protagonist/s. The pacing is good, each chapter gets you somewhere. The humor in this novel is also just right beside my taste.HOWEVER,the character design is too forced, the way they converse is too robotic and stiff. They have no feelings at all, the mc can even be considered as a repugnant douche with how he deals with things, although I don't particularly hate that kind of mc.The world building is too poor. The details are absolutely non-existent. Up until now, I have no idea what the mc looks like, that Jessica girl, and that Golden boy. Like, they just exist there, they do not have a single spoon of appearance or expression.And to top it all, the grammar is not even on an average level. There are too many newbie mistakes even in the synopsis itself. Let's take the scene where Jessica was being dramatic in front of the mc:"In the first moment she tried to resist, and even landed a few punches and slaps in his body. But after seeing that struggling was futile, she just accepted the facts and enjoyed the moment."How the f*ck can you punch and slap 'IN' someone's body.Using a little common sense would surely fix that problem, but that's not the point.Anyway, that's it for my review.IMPORTANT TO TAKE NOTE, I have no grudges with you and I don't hate your novel or whatsoever. I came here to review, not to kiss someone's ass despite their faults.Good job so far on your first novel. Keep writing and good luck.

There are only a few chapters but the stroy is very engaging and i like it. Filled with a lot of mysteries and I am a huge fan of legends😊😊🥰😊 looking forward to more.

For those who like Isekai and the development that you can expect from them, this is the story for you. Don't take my word for it. Try it yourself.

So far the the story is mysteriously interesting, I can't wait to see the end of volume 2!!! And also love the new cover it's really pretty!!

Hello my name is Hani moon I am 17 years old and I live alone.If you think I have a wonderful life your wrong because I have a bully named lee Felix  ever since middle school he always hated me for some reason . Well today we just got back from spring break and tomorrow we go back to school but I least I get to see my friends there group name is nct and wayv.

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"You ain't got the words to kill me. You are weak, just like your *****! Ladies don't like you, they like me, cause I spit super fire... Boi. You see this number?" Jero said as he handed Drunky a paper with a number on it.