Please update the chapter labeled \"Raveged Soul\" as it repeats the \"Failed Attempt\" chapter. Otherwise, the story is good overall. I want to know what happened before she got home the next day.
Possibly my favorite novel on the app, I’m absolutely loving the story and I use all my daily chapter unlocks on this. It’ll be sad when I catch up but I can’t wait to see what’s coming!
the main character story is good, everything else could be better.the annoying child friend could do without. make sure you can read the story and imagine it picture perfect, so go into specific detail about surroundings.
In title character have any personal emotions. This do the text more readable and i like this. But writer have low level of word vocabulary. English is not my native language, only learning it, and for me his text for me was not hard, but more normal and easy. Story has normal intresting, and development of protagonist I felt in half, where was start finally storytelling. For the number of words, my thanks. I can read title in any moment. For learn language at start be OK.
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