The Book is good but translator is bad, the translated chapters feel like the translator never played games before and many terms were wrong. Chapter 9 n 10 are the same. Much Amateur mistakes.
I like reading novels with a system involved that’s why I started reading this one. First of the characters. The MC is bland and we know next to nothing about him apart from his illness. There are also no side characters, more like extras in a movie that are rarely mentioned then easily forgotten. The speed in which his skills improve is way too fast. Maxing our his skills in a matter of days is just too much. There’s barely any effort involved except spending some time grinding his skills. I can understand the first few levels being leveled fast but mastering a skill should take along time. I don’t understand how cooking a few types of dishes will somehow max out his cooking skill since there are thousands of different recipes out there-the same goes for his other skills. Also the rewards for maxing our a skill is ridiculously high. It seems like everything is being handed to him on a silver platter and basically spoon feeding him with a spoon made of platinum. If the author slows down abit and start fleshing out his characters out and do some worldbuiling then this could turn out to be pretty decent. At the moment there’s a lack of a goal except for getting stronger.
This novel deserves 5 stars in nearly every aspect. The only 4 star was for the update rate, but you already explained the difficult circumstances you found yourself in and I understand that and wish you all the best for the healing process! :)I‘ve read countless web novels over the past years and I have to say that in comparison to them and the ones I read lately, this novel (and My Elf System) stands out exceptionally in so many ways. The world building, characters and their development, the action and lewd scenes and simply everything about it are so well thought out and written, that it captures the reader and leaves me wanting for more! Great work, dear author and please keep it up! I wish you all the best and am looking forward to future chapters.
Redoing my review after more than 30 chaps. Still love it. The lemons I was waiting for came and I wasn't dissapointed. MC is smart, the dialogues are realistic and not cringe. And the character design is interesting
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