Man this is seriously one of the most engaging LN i've read. And i've read a ton of them. Some may argue that the pace is too slow, but if i find something to be one of the strenghts of your work is precisely that detailed build up. Keep up the good work, i'm a fan now.
The story is interesting but I agree with the others. The grammar is half-bad although I can understand what you are trying to convey it is tiring to always guess the right words and reconstructing the sentences. You need to look for an editor. Once you release many chapters not all people has the patience to play "guess". Dont take this comment too hard. You have potential its just the grammar that's holding you back.
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Worst one I've read so far every trial read has first 3 comments made by bots and If u noticed they all pretty much have the same authors. They are writing bunch of random things for us with no actual background and there is no intention to complete it
It's my first time reading this type of novel and honestly, it's captivating how the Author narrates the story with perfection it is excellent how the author has described the real situation some of the events were informative Keep up the good work author
An excellent novel. In modern times, cultivation is one of the best of novels. Its potential is very good. Its future is a deep story. Publishing speed is slow. I can't wait for new episodes.
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