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Honestly, I don't really know what to say.I was trying to read this book for a month now. I am at 7th chapter and it's so boring that reading it for more than 15 seconds without skimming is impossible for me.People here say that character is smart. And while I wouldn't call him stupid, he is definitely not smart. Many things he did were things that just could be done better, and with less work.System as usual is completely unnecessary. He could very well just unlock three talents and be done with it. His talent about beast taming seems best of the three, but it's barely mentioned. He doesn't even use it in fights with monsters. Hellfire is a glass cannon. There was another one but I forgot throughout this arduous month.It feels like I am not reading a fantasy book, but a documentary, and I was never good with lengthy tomes. There is no action, just work work and work.Translation is awful, to the point where mc can have 'a hole in his body' and then completely ignore it. There are 4 or more power systems, each describing the same thing differently.All in all, I should be paid to read this. Because this is work. And I'm not paying to be able to work.

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The book is quite acceptable, however I will give the author a couple of recommendations... Give more prominence to the mc... The author makes a mistake that all authors of books make. and that is to give much prominence to a secondary pj is very boring to read several chapters of secondary characters and then a few of Mc... I'm not saying that I don't mind a couple of chapters telling the history of the world. The protagonist's past. Or one or another event in the world. However from my opinion that kind of chapters should not exceed the amount of (4), the perfect synchrony would be several chapters of the (Mc) And between 1 and 4 chapters of the past, secondary Pj, events in the world... This is my opinion. The book has a lot of potential simply is to give more prominence to the Mc. Read 10 chapters where there is no progress of the mc is totally boring ... PsdT: English is not my first language so excuse the spelling mistakes.

it was like that the invisible dragon was invisible so he couldnt be seen. However…

This is for several reasons, one of which was because I decided to drastically change the whole Pearl thing and have already got an even better idea (in my opinion) that will be easier to write and less common in a way.

Are you going to continue writing this novel?

AS SOON AS the elevator doors shut behind them, Payton faced J.D., rubbing her hands together eagerly. "So. We're going to have to hire associates right away. How many do you think we need to start? Five?"

Honestly, when it came to music, this guy really insisted on discarding his dignity as a main character and acting so frivolously.