the grammar is awful. the book is slow to start. couldn't bring myself to finish due to the trauma it triggered. the dialog and thoughts aren't very coherent.
Interesting. The idea and plot are there, characters are good, but….this is not written like a normal book. Hard sometimes to tell who’s perspective you’re reading when, let alone who talks when. Quotes are used as a last resort in this book. The reader needs to be creative, otherwise, decent book.
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