Songs Of A Distant Soul

"wow, this is a really huge  school. Not even a quarter compares to my old one" , gripping her Xena book in one hand and her registration documents on the other, Wei Mei, wove her way to the administration office.

16:25-27 Other mss have these vv. at the end of chap. 14 or 15.

This time Goutam answered,"Our village Kamalpura is situated at the border of the Pushpak kingdom and our Magadh kingdom.One end of the village has the army bases of our kingdom and the other end have theirs."

"Creak—!!"

"I won't but you have two have to behave like adult". Yuh always gives us lectures,he is typical business man.

Ben had never slept with me despite having turned eighteen, but he had turned me to a weapon and not just me, we were six girls and twenty boys, but he never trusted us girls, he only send the boys on a mission leaving us to protect the club. He was away when I conceived Joel, I knew nothing about him killing everyone who was supposed to have been protecting the club that day. He locked me up for a crime I did not participate, in fact I was a victim.

The book will be interesting just keep on reading

It seems fun and has potential. This truly feels like a great start to a novel with evil MC. Since the start of chapter 2 there are already signs of mystery and the world that MC might have stumbled upon.... well can't say more than this... Blablabla...Wordwordoword... countcount count

Muy buena escritura como siempre. Me gusta que la historia se desarrolla un mundo de fantasía con magia, quizá lo único que le faltaría sería que hubiera más razas, ya que de momento solo parecen haber humanos. Por lo demás todo está genial.