I gave the story an as much of a go as I could, reading up to chapter 48, but I just can't anymore, the writing quality and sentence structure is abhorrent, which means the editor is either a retard or inexistent. Bit of a shame seen as the story had potential, however I refuse to subject myself to the torture any longer. I honestly can't fathom how it's achieved such a high ranking when it truly doesn't deserve it. I actually feel bad for the lower rated and less viewed stories, that they have been put underneath this steaming mound of shite is rather depressing.
I'm thoroughly confused with this story .It's boring . MC killed his patents by his own mistake . Well here goes nothing .Read if you want .but I don't recommend it .
its quite great actually because I like inchest but I feel like this one is a copy becouse in another novel called Taboo system I guess is same as this but I feel this one is a rush and its hard to understand the plot.
Nothing but **** story is ****. Sorry its my opinion ''''''''''""""""''"'"""""''"'""'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''"'''''"'''''"''''''"''’'''''ज्ञ''''''''''''''
The setting makes no sense. The MC runs a small animal clinic, which the author claims is doing poorly. The reason being that a bunch of large and unethical animal hospitals have lost business to him. Instead of turning on their actual competitors, they all decide to send people to harass an obscure clinic.Also, it's hilarious how the MC decides to keep prescribing stuff despite instantly curing anything with the system, in order to earn money. In essence, the MC began running an unethical animal hospital himself.
So far the book is good and what I like the most is how the main character is creating his own world even thought it’s only 6 chapters in I will keep reading for now but keep it up author...;)
I would say the story is interesting but the author just cut to the chase, from the boy reincarnating into another world to being able to cast spell within the first 2-3 hours, I had say the concept is rubbishalso the magic that took people years to learn only took him 2 hours.The author should at least be considerate.
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