Sa lakas nang pagkakabunggo sa kanila ay muntikang nang mawalan nang balanse si Jules. Mabuti na lamang at nahawakan agad siya ni Ronnie sa kaniyang baywang upang huwag siyang mabuwal.
"Shut up! We do not want anyone to know. This was assigned by the boss so we will complete the job and then inform him. That's all there is to it." John said with an irritated look.
Damn, this is good! The writing here reminds me a lot of Shadow Slave, which makes it a delight to read. I didn’t have much hope when I clicked to start reading, but as I read more, I got more immersed, and before I knew it, I had already read all the available chapters. I believe that if you change your cover to a more professional one (made by AI, in other words...) and avoid falling into clichés, this has immense potential. Keep writing and let your imagination flow without limits, author. Impress us!
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