Slum King

Dont even bother.I read almost up to latest chapters around 500ish due to webnovel free novel deal, I gave it a shot.At first MC is supposed to be a “dragon” yet sneaks around for no reason but because he is being overly cautious. I have no issues with that but then he has some fetish of using his women as bait for a particular scheme and let them get molested. Thats where I draw the bottom line.You can hide, scheme and act. But there has to be a bottom line. Clearly the author is more interested in creating plot twists and schemes within schemes than making things make sense. Even a great schemer like Lelouch would never use his sister Nunally in his schemes. This work is a failed attempt at writing a scheming type of character yet having a strange dragon pride bloodline that doesnt matchThroughout the story, author loves showing how the MC acts stupid, wimpy etc to bait the enemies to attack etc. It repeats over and over. Then another common thing is for some reason his organisation has to clean house very often. Somehow ppl keep betraying his group. Cliche cultivation seclusion scenes. Cliche wife kidnapping scenes. Nothing new here or done better.Long monologues without any real story progression. MC powers up suddenly every 200chaps or so but somehow never levels up during time inbetween.Dont bother.

Having read a sample of chapters, it's safe to conclude that this story tries too hard to do too many things at the same time.Here's some of the gamut of tropes that the author tried to squeeze into his story:1. Having an unknown love child2. Conveniently having said love child's mother dead3. Having a new "stepmother" for said love child. 4. Introducing vr elements as a major component of the story5. Introducing corporate politics. 6. Introducing crime/mafia elements into this story. 7. Trying to include humorous elements. I could go on and on. My advice for the author is that while it's great that you're inspired by various ideas, it's more important for a newbie ******* writer to write his first story with as small a scope as possible. Frankly, even bestselling authors like Butcher will struggle and fail at incorporating all the elements in this story. I mean VR plus corporate politics plus crime/mafia? This could be three standalone novels rather than just one.This is without mentioning the terrible prose/dialogue and cardboard characters. I see that the author has written about 200 chapters of this dross. My advice is to take this current story as a learning project and start over with a brand new idea.

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It started out very good but around chapter 80 the story just gets nonsensical and directionless. There is no goal or reason for the things that the MC does. He for example helps some human because that human has heard of a legend that MAYBE there is a way to help is parents and for that reason alone he goes on a suicide and the MC who doesn't even know the guy or has any connection and has way more important things to do during that time, for no reason suddenly decides to risk everything and follows and carries that guy and constantly risks his life just so they can go to even more dangerous areas of a pocked dimension.

I like the Mc interaction with his disciple. And the author update everyday or every other day.

Before I begin the review, I must say that the author has written 7 Novels each with a different theme and unique reader experience. From Chinese Martial Arts to Indian Mythology, Campus Romance to Dystopian University by a Bipolar God, A Warrior reincarnated as a God to A Magical Beast Princess walking the path of Vengeance, it is very diverse. And the take on each is filled with unique concepts. From Science in Magic, to Mythology in Science, to Historical Figures in Modern Setting it is just amazing.Karna The True Elementalist does the justice to the theme it is written for and the readers it is meant for. If you have interest in either - Science, Mythology, History, Magic, or General Knowledge you will love this. It is really a unique way of combining all the above mentioned genres to come up with a Hybrid version that really shines. I request the author to post more frequently.

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Some typos at the start but the story so far for me is top and I can see he or she is tryings lots. Never seen something like this, the character isn't emo and is pretty funny after he gets his emotions back. AND ITS NOT EXTRA DRAMATIC... love the work author keep it up!