Cerita yang Bagus , penulisannya Lumayan , Memiliki Alur Yang Bagus , Dan Penjelasan Tentang Chakra Dan Jutsu Serta Pelatihan Tubuh Bagus , Benar² Konsep yang Bagus , Aku Harap Kedepannya Akan Ada Lagi lebih banyak Konsep dan penjelasan Jutsu Dan Pelatihan Lagi , bukan Hanya omong kosong seperti Fanfic lain oooo**
So disappointing his dream is to give away his beasts for free. Either that or the translator is so bad it seems that way. Literally the second strongest draw he sells for 5,000,000 which is just the same price as a useless sports car in a cultivation world.Everything is inconsistent, no dreams, bad characters. Idk just really off putting
Author enough with the racist sh*t....it's pissing me of...it's really so pointless....honestly I prefer Japanese peeps to Chinese peeps after the recent chapters....Chinese people are like monsters in the book....the Japanese accepted your welcomes with warm hearts but you just ended up tricking and backstabbing them
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A really good novel for those who want a system type in fantasy/magic world. Great read till now. Good progression and pretty interesting as novels go.
Seems like a really cool hidden gem but before I start reading it, I have one single question.1. What is the character of protagonist? Is he evil or good. If any how much and where does his bottom line lay.
Simply amazing! I am not a great fan of fanfiction novels but this one is stunningly well made. I really don't understand why this marvelous novel don't have more reviews. Come on readers! If you appreciate this work then do a review. Its only five minutes of your time and you would be encouraging the Author to continue to work hard!Extensive World Background descriptions and lore. Good Character Design; they feel lifelike and interesting. The story develop nicely and there is a balanced mix of action and discovery. The stability of updates is great and the writing quality its above the average novel.I totally recommend this novel to everyone who loves science fiction.
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