Shield Force 1: Billy Beast

Vitalia woke up early. She looked around to see her sisters sleeping peacefully. She got up and wiped the sweat and the wounds from their faces. She sighed at the poor sight of them. They were the ones who always fought for her. She felt useless, but they always reminded her that she was still important.

would spot them he said "inoue run i will lure them away"

"Nget I know that you seldom get the chance to talk to him, but how about me? I live far and I'm walking it's almost my curfew and my mom would kill me if I don't get there in time. There's a lot of chances in the future don't worry". Nishan consoled her best friend

And all that glitters is gold

"Did I catch a fever?" She asked herself. She had a headache as well.

Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot

Keep up for the updates bro! I'm want to see the prologue end, and entering the main story. I have a little advice, pay more attention to the correct use of punctuation in dialogue, especially the use of (,). Anyway goodstory!!