
She Professed Herself The Pupil Of The Wiseman (WN)
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Author:
Ryuusen Hirotsugu,
- Status: Ongoing)<br /> 534 Web Chapters (Ongoing
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The lack of character development is disheartening; emotions are superficial, and the author appears to be mimicking the conventions of a light novel without establishing a genuine foundation. It reads shallow and monotonous, akin to enduring a slow, tedious experience. I'll skip discussing the unsettling aspects, as there are other works with similar themes that I enjoyed more, but it's the execution that turned me off.
As for the translation, while there aren't major issues, numerous minor errors accumulate, creating an irritating reading experience. Inconsistent verb tenses, jumbled word order, and confusing sentences compound the already mediocre narrative. The translator's attempt at witty chapter titles comes across as forced and grating, especially when they all end with ellipses. It would be better to retain the original, unexciting titles.
I understand my harsh critique may seem unnecessary given my clear dissatisfaction, but I don't harbor hatred. The potential of the concept is evident, but it seems the author and translator deliberately chose to undermine it. My disappointment stems from their missed opportunities. Despite my grievances, I acknowledge their efforts. In essence, this story could have been enjoyable if not for the unfortunate alignment of my personal dislikes in light novel creation and translation.
The story's concept, while not entirely unique, captivates me with its seamless execution. Initially, the characters are immersed in their game as usual, but gradually, they start experiencing extraordinary sensations, like heightened senses, that hint at something beyond ordinary. The transition to the alternate world feels so natural that they initially dismiss it as a new update, attributing it to the game's mechanics. Our protagonist, for instance, wakes up 30 years ahead, embodying their ideal female avatar crafted from a vanity case – a paid item enabling character customization.
Caught in this bewildering situation, the protagonist questions reality. Everything around them appears authentic – the grass, the atmosphere, even NPCs exhibit human emotions. The familiarity of the surroundings, save for the missing three decades, leaves them utterly confused. To add to the intrigue, their original male avatar has become a legendary figure!
Driven by curiosity, she embarks on a quest to reunite with her initial companions, hoping they can shed light on the circumstances. However, what awaits her is a series of revelations and unexpected twists that promise to challenge her understanding of this extraordinary world.
What stands out is the meticulous attention to detail and world-building. Four years have passed since the series started, yet the MC has only discovered a few companions, resulting in occasional pacing issues but also a genuine sense of adventure that few other series achieve. The summoner abilities, including a unique blend of magic and martial arts, are intriguing as the author explores their capabilities in the real world, with action scenes providing entertainment.
While I find the early parts somewhat weak, I believe the series improves later on. I hope for a complete translation someday. Translating this series poses a challenge due to the MC's distinct,老年 Japanese speech patterns, which can be tricky to convey smoothly in English.
Nonetheless, despite these issues, the book could still be an enjoyable read for those eagerly awaiting updates on their favorite novel, especially if they can overlook the shortcomings.
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