Shadows Of The Dark

The story itself is pretty good. There are some obvious situations very similar to other novels but it has quite a lot of potential in my opinion.There would be 2 things which would need improvement though for me. The first is grammar since you have gone premium you really need to get a proofreader for your chapters especially the earlier free ones since they will get you readers.The 2nd is more of a writing improvement, because you have it sometimes that the execution of the reaction to a scene seems to be more of a narrating instead of showing. This makes it seem quite bland in comparison to your build up which is very good. I like how you build up the *******, if you make the conclusion more of a showing the expressions or changing to the viewpoint of fans or other people it would make it more immersive.I know that the author is quite new to writing and i see some improvements till now which makes me believe that it will become better and better.Therefore i would definitely recommend this novel to everyone esoecially to us which liked top management or i really am a superstar but were disappointed with the big flaws in IRAS and the discontinue of TM.

Love the novel. Whens chapter 41 gonn be uploaded…… .…. . .  . . . .  . . . . . . . . . .  . . . . . . . …  . . . . . . . .  . . . . . . . . .

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To be honest I generally don’t like these kinds of books but I actually liked this one and I recommend it 100% for those who don’t like this genre like me give it a try before judging it’s enjoyable and don’t just read a couple of chapters before deciding that you don’t like it

This story is good because it does not rush itself and always tries to bring out the best in it also the author is willing to learn from his mistakes and to improve

Love the exodus series keep up the good work

KillerHemboy is back! He posted an update in this novel. He might continue this novel at the beginning of 2022. idk. Just glad to know he's not dead.

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