Shadows of my Own Fate

this story....i don't know about other things but the human aspect and all the conversations are so natural. sometimes the mc is meh(like he used "urgh" 3 times back 3 back) but all the other bg characters are well thought and have a human like personality. for example mike and saya, they are literally like some people i know. and rosie and her seducing is so natural and doesn't feel forced at all. author u have a good Brain just improve in the mc to make the story perfect . lastly i am not a fan of the game(convanant or whatever the name is) if it was real....i would never play lol. i bet it will flop in real life😤

One of those common business tropes, with a system that helps you in your business (and somehow also gives you fighting powers),a big boss comes and invests in you,customers impressed with products but surprised with prices,business rivals destroying stuff and being assholes, and buying cool stuff with all your money, mostly for improving your business, I LOVE IT!🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐟🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠🐟🐠

Warning : This review is just a rant (I do it a lot) of me toward someone (not trying to give names here)Judging from it, it's for the moment akin to a cooking system but it's probably not the only uses of this quote-unquote "System" ( I say that because it's more like a GAME LIKE THE TITLE SAYS, I put an emphasis on that so that a certain person understand that with his brain the size of a peanut). The System has many uses, looking at memories of people (It sure is something everybody can do isn't it?), when his foods gets eaten, depending on a satisfaction factor, he'll get a certain amount of experience that can, after the level 5, be put in skill mastery like Physics, knife, heat control ... (Who can't do that I mean). There are also some achievements, some are useless (Probably because of how easy they are to get, who wouldn't understand that.. Wait ..) Some are useful, they have special attibutes, the system can also allow him to obtain magical item (who doesn't have those) like a container that stores food, and the food within it won't change at all, billboard that attract the attention of other..Also, shut up DWarden.. Ah damn I gave out the name.

A very intriguing tale from fellow writer the first chapter itself makes us hold on to our seats. I liked the story with a flavor of fantasy. The main character is not clueless but smart which i like. Over all I liked it keep up the good work author.

Author puffs up word count with putting characters whole stat multiple times per chapter. Has long drawn out sequences for no reason over multipe chapters.

typical story development, everyone is trying to become enemy of MC,just to admit into an institution you have to kill others which seems like evil way but portrayed as righteous and etc etc... I got bored and I am dropping it

Loved the premise. Strong start. The prologue is dark and foreboding. Excited for what is to come. Five stars for now. Will make a follow up review after more chapters arrive...

My sp was low so I took some minutes to recover.