Shadows Of Her Past

Nice book, I love the book plot. it got me hooked

Interesting idea, but the writing/ editing needs a bunch of work. Everything is choppy and makes it uncomfortable to read. When the author tries to describe things it becomes wordy, description is good, but it needs to make sense and not be so awkward.

Read quite of few stories like this one about going back to the past with a vr involve.  Starts off a little bit different but still the same.  I like how he levels up fast then taking it slow, since its seems the max level is 1000 in the game.       I understand his reluctance to be friends with people, but it would seem he was only betrayed in the beginning of the game and with is ex trying to kill him, but it seem he had good friends to since his ex mention that there were kill orders to the people close to him.       I hope the author explains later on why that person wanted him dead, his friends and the creator of the game, because it seems more than just the fact he was good in the game and the creator succeed in a vr game that he didn't.     I would have giving a higher rating but the MC behavior is a little annoying and I have read to many stories with this kind of setup.  Hoping the author surprises me later down the road with something new and the changes to the MC to be a little big more likeable.

it's hella good. kinda of stale in the beginning. but picked up pretty fast. it was enjoyable. kind of corny ending. but overall peak

I plan to, though it might take a while before I get back to it.

"Kalau aku pakai macam ni, dia buat tak tahu juga.. ermmm... hampeh betul  lah kau ni Bang Dollah!!" kata hati Rose....

"Prime, how has your training been?" Iroko cut her off, no longer planning to answer the question.

her tutor I don't like him a little bit so I take responsibility for her study, Olivia's exam gona start next week and in math she's not doing so well. ....