SHADOWS AMONG THE LIGHT

This seriously needs more chapters. The foreshadowing and little by little world building are amazing.                                                        

The synopsis is interesting...The story fascinated me from the beginning...it was intense, mysterious, and humorous... The character Dan is fantastic...Excellent work, Author!

actually, this is a nice story. The plot of the story is super exciting and it makes me want to read it more.keep it up, author.good luck with your future.

Hmmm, well written the synopsis and the world background but I don't know what is the point of the main character. I think we will know it for the upcoming chapters. No problem with the grammar.

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Well I read up to chapter 25 and I can say I enjoy the story. There are some grammatical mistakes and mixed up pronouns (using he instead of she and vice-versa) which can sometimes becomes confusing and might have to reread a paragraph a few times. I like the MC, he certainly feels like a god and doesn't necessarily care about mortals besides their value as divine power generators (at least up to ch 25). He is prideful and he doesn't let himself be kicked around by others like other novel protagonists who try to keep a low profile.   A suggestion that i have is that when the MC becomes too powerful and the story start to become dull because there is no conflict, you can always write povs from side characters and their struggles to achieve their lords wishes and stuff like that, or pov of the mc enemies, their struggle against a literal god. Kinda like in overlord. That novel would have been boring if it would have been just about Momonga. TL;DR   This story is very enjoyable with a lot of potential. Although it has a few mistakes I had fun with it and i recommend it. Cannot wait the to see this novel take off and maybe even reach the top 10.SPOILERS AHEAD  I see the author tries to add elements of romance with Anika which I don't mind if done well, but feels a bit forced with him feeling some strange attraction towards her or something, (which could be explained by him assimilating a mortal soul, or simply the hormones of the mortal body) but the author hasn't explained the attraction yet.Writing Quality 3.5/5   As i said there are some grammar mistakes here and there, and sometimes it can make the story confusing. These mistake are really important to get fixed because it can drive away new reader and can really hurt the chances of this story to take off. I might be a little harsh with this rating but sometimes it breaks the flow and immersion of the novel when Anika suddenly becomes a man. But the grammar is better than most other novels here. Story Development 4/5  There are only 25 chapters atm so I can't really say anything about it. But from what I read it's pretty nice. We are learning together with the MC about this world and it's system of power.Character Design 4/5  Well the characters are good, at least that's what i think. I like plague master.Update Stability 5/5 THIS MAN IS A BEAST 19 CHAPTERS IN A WEEK!!!World Background 5/5There are not much chapters, but i have faith in the author from what i have seen up until now.Good luck author-san, and wish you all the best to you and your novel. I will be watching your career with great interest.

love love love this book. Amazing story very thrilling and exciting and the comic antics are icing on the cake. all characters are so different yet each unique but our Little zhaozhao...our adorable FL takes the lead. author are there any other of your works, would love to read them too. kudos to u on this amazing brilliant piece of work

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