Another hidden gem, uploaded silently. Let's see if it goes unnoticed. For those interested, is a faceslap novel, the MC is basically an OP sheltered young lord but ignorant of the outside world, wich makes him decided scape and roamed the world meeting possible followers, slapping the face of the disrespectful and being domineering when the situation is needed so it's funny and entertaining... good for those that enjoyed LoHP, Absolute Teacher, and so.
Good story with good character but there are, in my opinion, two major problem: the first one is just the fact that, for me, some description are sometime too long like the one when all the most powerful NPC met to see if everyone has a student. But the biggest problem I have with this story isn't just in this one bit in lot of others too, it's about the future rival in love you spoke about. In all the LN the MC needs to fight against problem, he needs to resolve problems but in novels like this one where love is a really important part I think that making the relation growing steadily without too much external elements can be better because introducing a love rival will just be unpleasant and uncomfortable to see because even if its just a story when you see how much the MC loves Amanda, making him suffer (in the future) with a rival is just sadistic so I think that if you have a bit of empathy for the MC when you read a novel I just advise you to search for another LN because this one is great but in the future it might become unpleasant and the fact that we might need to wait between two chapters at crucial time could be really unpleasant. I might be overthinking but it's just my opinion. But overall it's well written.
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