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The VRMMO is terribly designed. It has the most bare bones framework but nothing past it. It's hard to gauge the difficulty of fights as we have no clue how much HP the monster has or how much DMG MC (or anyone else, really) does. At best we get some vague **** like 'boss has tons of hp' and 'MC deals hills of dmg'. Stats are just numbers and they play little role besides 'he added points in agility now he's faster'. It's just too vague to be appreciated. Leveling curve is kind of nonsense to be honest, but, whatever, it's a power-fantasy VRMMO, it's not like you can expect any better. female characters in this novel are insufferable There's not a single decent female character in the novel. Every few chapters, new chick gets introduced and I just want to punch them all in the face. Perhaps the worst point is that the MC just goes along with their insanity. Our mc just does whatever people want because he is an, ”good person”. Writing style is... not that great. Excessive repetition, empty paragraphs of nothingness, very, very vague fights (MC dodged, he attack, he dodged them all easily, bam they're all dead). There's occasional fight with more detail, but not by a large margin. Even the very first BOSS fight is basically 'MC discovered the flaw, MC dodges, MC strikes, MC kills, the end'.
More chapters!!! The character building is good and I love the concept on how you adapt the game setting into the timeline of the plot including the updates and patches of the real game
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you🙏📖
I take off my hat and proceed to applaud for the great novel you have written. It's one of the best horror & thriller stories I've ever read. I will be more than happy to read more chapters of this masterpiece. Congratulations, Author. Keep it up :D
The story is really intriguing, this kinda undercover stories and spy stories always hold my attention. I would love to read till the end.For author:Well written, well explained, keep writing.recommend💫💫💫💫💫
This is a pretty decent novel. Though I can see many similarities of this to a certain JP LN, there's nothing I could do much about that huh.Nevertheless, I can say that this novel is worth reading. Hope the Author updates this more frequently.PS: 10th review for your novel to have it's Rating
Reviewing this author is quite a dare, the search engine with the name or pseudonym: Mel_Aniv, lists 64 works...The Story: Lumia: Another World.Genre: Fantasy 224 Chapters 830.7K viewsThe first chapter: Retreat... was written on 25 April 220; Mel_Aniv, has been writing for 9 consecutive months. He shows perseverance, being a professional, involved artist, a gifted reader-writer providing hundreds of avid pages full of stories to listen to, tell or just read.Translated with ***.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)
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