Serial Desire

Okay honest review here the whole idea was amazing but story it' self isn't the reason.1: Everything is rushed, the story is developing to fast.2: MC doesn't interact with other characters much3: MC fucking didn't change a thing in MCU until Avengers first move. I haven't read after that.Okay something would like to tell.1: Make the paragraph of only about 5-7 lines and that all a try to write dialogue in different lines.If you author has done writing this story once try writing it again and then give it to your all I will support you.Aside from all that can only say A for effect but just write this story again for only two times as I said earlier and this story will be top MCU fanfic

This novel may be good for some a people , but for me it's NOT. Because I don't like novels where MC are full of ignorance.................................................................

I see nothing wrong bc it such a great, great. At first I thought it was one of those simple and similar BL but this one was quite different. Maybe it’s bc I haven’t read a lot more yet but this is a great piece that I enjoy very much.

The MC is pretty stupid and seems to be mentally retarded, but the story is funny.......Seriously author, could you make the MC a little less retarded and give him the intelligence of a normal person?

Excellent Novel. Keep it up.                                                                                                                                                                           

Very good story. Thanks for the work autor-san, i hope this got bigger because you deservet it.Good luck for the future!..........................................................................................

"How cute!" she chuckled, but it made her heart ache.

A searing pain in his back leg stole Arawn's breath away. It stopped him mid jump. He tried to catch himself, but it was too late, and he fell in a pile of squirming and screaming bodies.