Senseless [Golden Gemini]

If his mother or anyone from God World were to know what he made do to those dragons, they would likely strangle him. Dragons are below only to the Pure Gods, they are at the Mythical God level, and the nine dragons have already reach the Pure God level before their spirit are taken.

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

The doctor looked sarcastically.

This story lacks substance. The characters are boring

The grammar is really bad consisting almost entirely of run on sentences....................................................................

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.Your turn. And I look forward to your thoughts on my Going In Completely Blind fanfic.